A poem
April19
This is really bad. OK I got that over with.
When the sun sets
and the rocks crumble
our last breath
in our world tumbles
back into space
as our world ends
unlike the circle of life
there’s nothing to begin.
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This is really bad. OK I got that over with.
When the sun sets
and the rocks crumble
our last breath
in our world tumbles
back into space
as our world ends
unlike the circle of life
there’s nothing to begin.
It’s actually better than you would think when you actually pay attention to the words.
oops…^
This is a great poem!! I love the rhythm of this post and the words are truly amazing and unique!
Hi, Your poem was really inspirational. I would recommend for you to do longer poems in the future, So other readers can enjoy.